Mary-Sue alert!!!!!!!!!!!

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:iconselanairequeen: just deleted their Journal about how their character is not a Mary-Sue

I commented :
"a mary sue is not an real insult.It is simply describing a female character that is unoriginal,over powerd,rip off and down right a little Miss Perfect.
There is also Gary-Stu or Marty-Sue wich is the male version.

You make Kechi a goddes and a princess not to mention all forms an powers you gave her.
You made her french because apperently it's sexy but in reallity it's not gonna make your character any better.
You gave her M cups wich is way to much for a woman to handle.
You ripoff Sonic,Meroid,Kill la Kill etc. wich is unoriginal.
You character is a Mary-sue

people just want you to give her flaws and less powers and help you make a balanced character.

I am NOT hating on you , I am just telling you why pople say that and how to prevent it.
and please don't just block me and hide! Actually take my advice!

your character is also internet wide known to be badly writen:

whyfags.blogspot.fr/2013/07/so…
fyeahbadsonicart.tumblr.com/po…

Please just think about it instead of sitting on your ego"

I just tried being a critique here and help them improve their character but after that they deleted their journal.

How come they want such a big fanbase but won't accept critique?
Only reason they are popular is because they keep asking people for request's and they keep advertaising themself on other DA users.

I saw a comment of them at my friends page :iconxxa-bubble-gumxx: where she advertaised her own art not actually having any intention to talk to her. Btw check :iconxxa-bubble-gumxx: out,shes very good at drawing and character creating.

anyway... Kechi is a big Mary-Sue that can't even take critique without blocking you and complaining about you.
She also ripsoff famous video game and Animes not to mention other peoples characters and artwork.

She rather get other people to draw her character for her instead of improving her art and trying different poses.
She always makes contest where people should draw Kechi but get NOTHING out of it.I mean hellooooo it's a contest.
and her character downright look like a mixture of Venus The Hedgehog (fc) and Amy Rose with different colors and Kill la Kill rip off.
Not to mention her toeboots. I mean come on what the hell....
She makes commission for those toeboots aswell where she simply recolors a base.
She owns people art but is waaaayyy to arrogant and selfish to not draw Kechi instead of promised art.

"Kechi the smexiest Hedgehog alive" WHAT THE HEEEELLL

Kechi is an extremly rude person who can't take anything that isn't a compliment.
Her fans just kiss up her butt and thats all Kechi wants.

She is the biggest Mary-sue out there and it's disgusting how much of an attention seeken person she is.




I hope I am not the only one who realizes that Kechi is a MARY SUE!!!!


Now she's sending people after me calling me a "fucker" and a "brat"
What a lovely woman indeed

Apperantly I am a "bitch" and people who give simple critiqhe are "trash"
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Character reviews of Kechi:
fyeahbettersonicfancharacters.…
whyfags.blogspot.fr/2013/07/so…
fyeahbadsonicart.tumblr.com/po…
sonicfc-critic.deviantart.com/…


Kechi getting knocked out will not do anything.Kechi honestly believes that it will and keeps calling me "brat,idiot,bitch etc."

You're not accomplishing anything Kechi  Ok I deleted that entry, because my fellow friendsIn order to stop this madness I'll let Z KO Kechi so things are back at peace and those brats are content

By the way Kechi made the mistake insulting me instead of just talking to me thats why this journal exist.
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