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:iconselanairequeen: just deleted their Journal about how their character is not a Mary-Sue

I commented :
"a mary sue is not an real insult.It is simply describing a female character that is unoriginal,over powerd,rip off and down right a little Miss Perfect.
There is also Gary-Stu or Marty-Sue wich is the male version.

You make Kechi a goddes and a princess not to mention all forms an powers you gave her.
You made her french because apperently it's sexy but in reallity it's not gonna make your character any better.
You gave her M cups wich is way to much for a woman to handle.
You ripoff Sonic,Meroid,Kill la Kill etc. wich is unoriginal.
You character is a Mary-sue

people just want you to give her flaws and less powers and help you make a balanced character.

I am NOT hating on you , I am just telling you why pople say that and how to prevent it.
and please don't just block me and hide! Actually take my advice!

your character is also internet wide known to be badly writen:

whyfags.blogspot.fr/2013/07/so…
fyeahbadsonicart.tumblr.com/po…

Please just think about it instead of sitting on your ego"

I just tried being a critique here and help them improve their character but after that they deleted their journal.

How come they want such a big fanbase but won't accept critique?
Only reason they are popular is because they keep asking people for request's and they keep advertaising themself on other DA users.

I saw a comment of them at my friends page :iconxxa-bubble-gumxx: where she advertaised her own art not actually having any intention to talk to her. Btw check :iconxxa-bubble-gumxx: out,shes very good at drawing and character creating.

anyway... Kechi is a big Mary-Sue that can't even take critique without blocking you and complaining about you.
She also ripsoff famous video game and Animes not to mention other peoples characters and artwork.

She rather get other people to draw her character for her instead of improving her art and trying different poses.
She always makes contest where people should draw Kechi but get NOTHING out of it.I mean hellooooo it's a contest.
and her character downright look like a mixture of Venus The Hedgehog (fc) and Amy Rose with different colors and Kill la Kill rip off.
Not to mention her toeboots. I mean come on what the hell....
She makes commission for those toeboots aswell where she simply recolors a base.
She owns people art but is waaaayyy to arrogant and selfish to not draw Kechi instead of promised art.

"Kechi the smexiest Hedgehog alive" WHAT THE HEEEELLL

Kechi is an extremly rude person who can't take anything that isn't a compliment.
Her fans just kiss up her butt and thats all Kechi wants.

She is the biggest Mary-sue out there and it's disgusting how much of an attention seeken person she is.




I hope I am not the only one who realizes that Kechi is a MARY SUE!!!!


Now she's sending people after me calling me a "fucker" and a "brat"
What a lovely woman indeed

Apperantly I am a "bitch" and people who give simple critiqhe are "trash"
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Character reviews of Kechi:
fyeahbettersonicfancharacters.…
whyfags.blogspot.fr/2013/07/so…
fyeahbadsonicart.tumblr.com/po…
sonicfc-critic.deviantart.com/…


Kechi getting knocked out will not do anything.Kechi honestly believes that it will and keeps calling me "brat,idiot,bitch etc."

You're not accomplishing anything Kechi  Ok I deleted that entry, because my fellow friendsIn order to stop this madness I'll let Z KO Kechi so things are back at peace and those brats are content

By the way Kechi made the mistake insulting me instead of just talking to me thats why this journal exist.
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:iconfianna2016:
Fianna2016 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Are you ok
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:icondimastrength:
dimastrength Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am wandering around google to get reference for my fantasy world.
Then searching up for "what is mary-sue".

Then I ended reading this journal....

Thank's for the info, lol
:D (Big Grin) 
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:icondimitriwarchief123:
DimitriWarchief123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
Claps) you sir, are a true warrior of honor... I guess
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:icongranddragoonknight:
granddragoonknight Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i realize that  this is an old journal but i figure that despise kechi's mary-sueness  theirs always a universe with her and those like her. seeing as sonic has a multiverse just like its dbz counterpart. however i feel that you were right to try and help him/her although they should have taken your criticism's well and balance their oc out.
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XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015
Sorry for the late response.
Yea it is ok to like him and really he can do whatever but he doesn't have to flip over at critique.
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:icongranddragoonknight:
granddragoonknight Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thats basicly a general human reaction to negative criticism
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:iconthediscoturkey:
TheDiscoTurkey Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor you T^T I had some problem with fanbrats.
An incester emo called Kumuzi-Ouji has bitched on me because he considers Gardevoir masculine.
I said it's feminine and Kumuzi started acting like a depressed 5-year-old pussy whore...
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XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015
Sorry for the very late response.
thats immature of them.
While Gardevoir's are both male and female they look very feminine.
Regardless they shouldnt yell about it -_-
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:iconthediscoturkey:
TheDiscoTurkey Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah :^(
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glass-frogs Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
I feel absolutely terrible that people were flaming you over this, hope it get's better. 
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014
that is very sweet of you thank you <3
don't worry it is over. I am not gonna bother with this person anymore :/
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:icondigitaltechno:
DigitalTechno Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Learn better English and grow up,kid.
Do you think when you're typing this shit?Or your brains are on a vacation?
You're a 17 year old and have a maturity of a 5 year old.No offence,but you're a whining fanbrat/ass kisser who only want to protect Kechi's ass by illuminating all of her "haters".
Do you even realize what a hater is?Hater is just a person who hates other people for a reason.
This person ISN'T A HATER.She's trying to help her,not insult her or kick of DA.
GET.THE.F***.OFF.FROM.HERE.DeviantArt is already full of drama,this ISN'T A DRAMA SITE.Find other sites where your shit is usefull.
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:iconhopeful-star:
Hopeful-Star Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If you can't give a good argument, might as well shut up Gage.
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:iconsonniejaye:
SonnieJaye Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's sad how you're getting verbally assaulted over this...
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
There is really no need to insult a person.
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:iconsonniejaye:
SonnieJaye Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I know or sending people to attack. That's not the way to handle a situation.
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Insulting people behind their back isn't nice either.
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:iconsonniejaye:
SonnieJaye Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Insulting in general isn't nice especially when there is no reason to
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
I never meant to come off harsh.I tried to critique but apperently insults and other people have to fix this.
I just don't get this.
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:iconsonniejaye:
SonnieJaye Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Some people just take them as insults. Don't know why though.
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Art,Characters,Stories,Photos etc. will be critiqued.
It is normal espacially on DevianART
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InsanityBloodRose Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Leave her alone. Nu one wants this at all.
just forget about her. She not a ripped off of Amy Rose & kill la kill.
She a fan of kill la kill. Your the one who causing problems for her.
She not a Mary Sue.
www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&…
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Now tell me why she is not a mary sue
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:iconinsanitybloodrose:
InsanityBloodRose Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amy is a pink hedgehog with short hair & wear a dress.
Amy is a child.
Kechi is a yellow hedgehog with long hair with blue highlights & wear a skirt & sleeveless top.
Kechi is an adult.

your fighting over something really stupid. It's her character not your's.
Your making a big fuss when everyone complain about Akai Dalia was a ripped off of Amy Rose.
Kechi is not a Mary sue. People like you don't nothing to do on here but cause problems & drama.
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XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
You simply look at one sentence wich is her resambling Amy a bit.You simply don't know how making characters work.I tried siply talking to Kechi. She started the fight and you are just a sad butt kisser with no opinion of their own.
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InsanityBloodRose Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I made more characters then you.
Talk to her & saying her character a mary sue in front of her,
which is not true. I can see why you people think that.
She is friendly, but saying someone character a mary sue which they being working on for months or years.
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XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
"I made more charcters than you" very mature of you indeed. besides why does itmatter and how do you know how many characters I have made.Well how am I suppossed to know she can't take critique? Alot of people say she is a Mary Sue and also why.It is not an insult it is a term used for way to overpowered characters.
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:icongagepatricia1516:
Gagepatricia1516 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
ok bitch shut ur ugly whore ass mouth up her character is better the was it is u idiot she is not a mary sue and +she doesn't need advice not even by your sorry ass for treating people like shit u just want people weak well that's not gonna happen it's our choice and ideas what we do to our characters not urs and we don't need rude rotten haters like u or anybody else talking bad stuff about our characters which is not true we don't need any of it and + it's none of ur business so how about u leave leave them and everybody else alone u worst of a living thing on earth also i'm an immortal and we r never changing at all and we r also never becoming weak either
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CreativiZ-Rocks Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Student General Artist
And here we have the immature scrotum in it's natural habitat. It goes after people who have only posted their opinion, that makes sense, and tries to insult them. It fails to do so because the little shit doesn't have a dictionary nor common sense. It also talks like it's five years old... Poor little thing... 
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Warriorcatgirl04 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dearest Gagepatrcia1516,

I have a couple things to say to you. Number one, HOW DARE YOU? You are being rude and pathetic trying to hate on someone who didn't do anything to you. Just wow. "u worst of a living thing on earth also i'm an immortal and we r never changing at all and we r also never becoming weak either" Really? You're immortal? Congratulations to you for totally acting like a real-life Mary Sue. It makes me want to punch you. I know you're not really Immortal, who is? God. Anyways... if you are Immortal, how does that relate to the argument? Pffft. Nice try.

Second, you are swearing. XNekoCakeRawrX is only calmly speaking with you. Calm down, what's got you so angry?

Third, don't try to insult me to try and make me stop talking to you. It won't work.

Thank you, I hope you take time to calm down after reading this before replying.
With kindness, Warriorcatgirl04.
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Wow anger issues much.
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:icongagepatricia1516:
Gagepatricia1516 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
jealous much that ur a wimp for nothin XD
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Sorry I can not go down on your level. You're way to pathetic. Do us all a favor and shut the hell up.
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:icongagepatricia1516:
Gagepatricia1516 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
oh wow the cunt without a life is calling me pathetic when she is pathetic herself good job for being the stupidest coward on earth would u like a loli for that ugly mouth of urs mam XD
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Good for you. I do not care about what you say .
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:icongagepatricia1516:
Gagepatricia1516 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
u try but ur afraid
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
I m not gonna bother with you
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:iconxxsnow-of-heavenxx:
xxsnow-of-heavenxx Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
excuse me but my friend do this if he want okay!
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
So you think it is okay to just insult people like that? 
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:iconxxsnow-of-heavenxx:
xxsnow-of-heavenxx Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
* sigh * i know she insult you first but is not a reson to do more
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:iconxnekocakerawrx:
XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Well I am not insulting her.
If she wants this gone she has to do it herself.
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XxA-Bubble-GumxX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Oh wow it's Sonichu all over again.

People need to stop being so butthurt and start understand other's oppinion.
Theres a differents between hating and critic.

don't worry about it Neko
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DimitriWarchief123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
NOOPE its not... Sonuchu was like only one guy careing, this be akai again, sorry just wanted to well... I just felt a need to say
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XNekoCakeRawrX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Sonichu already sounds like something bad.
Thank you 
I am glad you stay neutral about this, Draven
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:icondimitriwarchief123:
DimitriWarchief123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
You have no idea of sonchu is... Dang... Your pretty lucky... I guess
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zerotolorance Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i agree fully with Kechi being nothing more than an overpowered poor excuse for a character. fan character or not, the building of a character is a simple idea of balance between advantages and faults. Kechi has no faults, she has no flaws, not even a weakness and every time a weakness does show its ugly head she throws a million and one things at it to negate it and gives some bullshit excuse for the negation. her design is downright ridiculous. M sized jugs? Toe boots? even her outfit just screams attention whore. what especially pisses me off is how she "borrows" ideas from franchises and uses them as her own without homage or recognition. that armor? (or that name Kechi la Kechi) obviously kill la kill. Her daughter being a galactic bounty hunter who wears power armor? Metroid. or how about the fact that right after posting a journal about how the author started playing Lightening Returns, she suddenly decided to give herself the nickname Yellow Lightening.  it's ok to be inspired by something, but ripping it off completely is  disgrace to both the character and the artist.

building a character is not that hard. everyday things could build a great character, just think of oneself and realize that you're already a unique character.  balance is the key. what are some dillemas someone might have? what are flaws a character could have? just look at sonic, he's fast and powerful, but put him in water and he sinks like a rock. Super man has the most well known weakness against kryptonite. even spidermans greatest flaw is trying to balance his life as peter parker and spiderman. there are a number of things Kechi can do with her story. she has an evil brother for one thing, that could've lead to some interesting conflict. even her daughter from the future could have brought some interesting dialogue but no, any conflict in her life or flaws in her character are rubbed out so she can be perfect. the exact definition of a Mary Fucking Sue  
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DimitriWarchief123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
Hmm say you seem very knowledgeabe bout charcters... I have lots of ocs... Maybe you could help me balance them abit... Dah sorry mate, good comment thing though
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zerotolorance Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sure thats no problem just send me a few ref sheets and I'll see what I can evaluate
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DimitriWarchief123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
Aw should have feared you say that... For you see i do have many chartcetbut unfortly... Haven't really done a ref sheet yet... Embersseing i know
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